Monday, 18 October 2010

Writing a Book - Need Advice about the first chapter

I am writing a book for the 9-13 age group. I have been trying to revise it. But I need more audience feedback. Since I know a few teachers who teach lower elementary read this sometimes. I thought I would ask you to read the first chapter and let me know what you think. I was inspired by The Penderwicks. But, I truly do have three girls whose personality is very entrenched in these three characters. My Story

This link is my other blog. Please leave your thoughts, ideas and questions. If you have young daughters in this age group, I would appreciate if you share it with them and give me some of their thoughts.

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